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Dream Kind

Author: Rhythmal
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part of "True Method"
written by myself 5/17/09 at 1:00 am

Dream Kind

Dream kind, dream killers. Sleep softly and let the city die.
Nowhere to go, nowhere home. Sleep this summer let the dreams take you, death is release but not a solution, death is peace but not resolution.

we live to be free, we live to be happy, we live for love and life and nothing less.

We're born beautiful and we die well. We are Gallant, Valliant, and Strong. We are True, Peaceful, and Poetic. We are fresh, we are blessed by Karma
We are Human

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