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    dots Submission Name: Dream Kinddots
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    Author: Rhythmal
    Elite Ratio:    2.41 - 29/50/46
    Words: 90
    Class/Type: Prose/Passion
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    Description:
       part of "True Method"
    written by myself 5/17/09 at 1:00 am


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    dotsDream Kinddots
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    Dream kind, dream killers. Sleep softly and let the city die.
    Nowhere to go, nowhere home. Sleep this summer let the dreams take you, death is release but not a solution, death is peace but not resolution.

    we live to be free, we live to be happy, we live for love and life and nothing less.

    We're born beautiful and we die well. We are Gallant, Valliant, and Strong. We are True, Peaceful, and Poetic. We are fresh, we are blessed by Karma
    We are Human




    Submitted on 2009-08-11 01:22:39     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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