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    dots Submission Name: Plague Culture 2dots
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    Author: col13x
    Elite Ratio:    2.26 - 119/300/559
    Words: 309
    Class/Type: Poetry/Dark
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    dotsPlague Culture 2dots
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    Plague Culture 2


    With the screeching of hate I am
    Materialised in fire
    And the rapid fire of sanctimonious weapons
    A joyous blood dance of victory

    Unburdened by the feather of my conscience
    I reign by the rotten pith of its layers peeled away
    By the ignominious gangster rap
    On golden chains self absorption I lay out my righteous excuse

    Yes, I am the vociferous and underhanded little plague
    Beating with all my sanctioned weight at the doors of your freedom
    The keys in all your locks are mine to jangle
    But close, never open the flood gates of salvation

    I rest at your feet
    Ravenous beast
    And this papier-mâché edifice
    Licks the computer sweat off your ignorant brow

    Death incarnate my echo steps in marble halls
    Behind iron clad vaults
    And in putrid piles of tiny shiny discs of gold
    I am still counting the cost of my self-explored mayhem

    But; it is so easy to be lulled to sweet cadavers
    Where numb and empty is so full of meaning
    And the pleasure of skin finds its intoxicating
    That boredom itself is exchanged for living

    And still ravenous for the great grand dream
    I am bidden to do anything
    Where the feather of my conscience can slip past
    The gloating bars of my prison

    I have succoured in the trash alleys of your lies
    And found the façade you purchase with agreement
    I am the contortionist of hope
    In the hope that someday hope; will be enough

    I am a killer by default
    A mercenary by the act of my birth
    The screaming child of sunrise
    I am the feather which hangs on my conscience


    When in the pit, it is so easy to recognise the light




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