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    dots Submission Name: they call her ...ericadots
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    Author: Thief
    ASL Info:    22/male/plainview
    Elite Ratio:    4.8 - 180/80/69
    Words: 195
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
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    dotsthey call her ...ericadots
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    A long awaited crush in sight
    waiting to be brought to light
    was i too late?
    is this my cruel fate?
    if so, i will embrace in...
    but, does that mean ill feel like shit?
    to be alone, is a burden of its own
    tortured by all else with love to show
    ill admit, im jealous of them
    they make my life seem more dim...
    but theres this girl, shes different.
    in my eyes - shes...heaven sent.
    beautiful in every way.
    words to describe - i cant say
    its all so undescribable
    without her, life goes back to dull.
    all i need is the slightest touch.
    so i disguise it in a hug
    i close my eyes to see her face
    id rather see her in person though, to make through the days
    but i want more! i hate being like this
    i want to experience bliss
    i want to be happy, no - a reason to live
    i want to show what i can give
    right now im in the dark
    and im looking for a spark
    until then, im filled with hate
    im tired of this, but right now - i must wait.




    Submitted on 2009-08-11 17:57:01     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      You know, poetic people are so different from others. Ive only once had a poet boyfriend and god was he so different from the others. But he had so many of his own demons to fight within himself that he couldn't bear to be with me. Long story but regardless.
    This poem made me think about how I always feel so envious, seeing all of the others in love all around me yet im all alone. And then I thought about why are we alone? The poetics, we are deeper than others. We should be the ones with love. Yet, most poetics and poems are of sadness, heartbreak, and loneliness. I don't understand..
    | Posted on 2010-09-18 00:00:00 | by girly101 | [ Reply to This ]
      wow!
    i mean that.
    its good.
    and wow!
    i liked it.
    rachel:)
    | Posted on 2009-08-11 00:00:00 | by PopRocksRae | [ Reply to This ]


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