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    dots Submission Name: Detritis Bloomdots
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    Author: Cloacina
    ASL Info:    25/F/KY
    Elite Ratio:    5.24 - 20/53/54
    Words: 164
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
    Total Views: 20
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
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    dotsDetritis Bloomdots
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    It's not a flower-
    just a clump of garbage,
    snared upon the stalk,
    he says.
    I show him the stem
    from which it grows.

    Straw cup
    falls in blonde
    thin leaf rays,
    thick flared skirt,
    arched vertical lines
    with brown and straw mache
    fabric between.

    The bloom so heavy,
    the stem bowed
    face passes from the sun
    studies stalk,
    littered creekside ground.

    Lifting,
    I see beneath
    layers of green leaf bits-
    dead ones
    in coffee brown-
    some so far gone,
    they're just pallid
    lacy outlines
    the color of lightly
    tinted bone,
    like small, decomposing
    wings.

    He says it looks
    like a half eaten bug.

    I have never seen a flower,
    so bizzare,
    so uninviting,
    but it is to fascinating
    to fail the eye.

    A detritis bloom,
    a hollow, fallen
    flower,
    who scavenges on the shore,
    stuffing random bits of life
    into its empty center,
    until the weight of being full,
    reminds it
    of the potential fall
    to ground.




    Submitted on 2009-08-11 19:45:39     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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