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    dots Submission Name: Thoughts of Harodots
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    Author: vLame
    ASL Info:    21/m/lbc
    Elite Ratio:    1.61 - 15/18/50
    Words: 104
    Class/Type: Random Thoughts/Longing
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    dotsThoughts of Harodots
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    when i rest my weary self i imagine your serene smile and it keeps me content until the next time we can indulge each other's sight with an endless array of happiness...

    ~~~

    I was never aware beauty of your calibur existed until I saw you open your heart to me and I finally realized the truth of what could be. It is heavenly and I thank you for letting me perceive an allure so immaculate.

    ~~~

    I could die in your arms.

    ~~~

    Lately, my dreams have had a theme
    it's of you they so often screen.




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