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    dots Submission Name: APPLICATION FOR YOUR LOVEdots

    Author: Bones
    ASL Info:    40/M/ALABAMA
    Elite Ratio:    2.75 - 11/10/18
    Words: 288
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
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    My heart: It would belong to you and the lord
    My hands: they would be there to help you in
    any way they can they will be there to hold your
    hand and to lay upon you for prayer when you
    need it.
    My eyes and mind: they will be upon you and
    the lord, they shall not desire anyone but you.
    My feet: they are there to walk beside you and
    stand strong with you.
    My arms: they will be there to hold, comfort,
    Love you and to carry you when needed.
    My love: I will give you my love and only you
    my love, I shall love and cherish you all the days
    I have left here on earth.
    MY Lips: my lips shall speak with love and kindness always, they shall never speak against you in
    any harsh way; they shall give you love and respect always and never miss treat you.

    Written By: William D Thompson JR

    Submitted on 2009-08-12 02:25:45     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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