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    Author: kairi bloom
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    Wednesday, July 29, 2009
    why
    Current mood: distraught
    i never knew this would hit so hard, i never thought it would be so soon, i never felt this down before, ive never loved one as i had. i dont think he'll ever know how much he hurt me, he beats everyone, nobody has hurt me to the point of coughing so hard to almost get sick nobody has made me so down that my closest friends couldnt cheer me up. nobody.
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    Sunday, January 25, 2009
    what i loved about him
    Current mood: pessimistic
    Its been almost a year since i was stupid enough to believe your crap. Almost a year ive been gullible. But for some reason, im still thankful. Without you, i would still be the gullible annoying talkitive person i used to be. Without you, i would have no common sense. ...And without you, i wouldnt know what true love was. In my own head anyway. Those things you said to me, to make me feel better. When someone called me fat and ugly, you said Im not, and if i ever grew up to be, you would come and marry me yourself. The way you stood up for me when people made fun of me, the way you would buy me chocolate and demand to buy something for me to cheer me up. The way you would pull me out of rooms just to ask me what was wrong. They way you pulled me into rooms and kissed me like you hadnt seen me in years.The way you hugged me for a whole hour till i had to leave. Thanks for the memorys that i get to cry over at night. Thanks for the common sense, thanks for the disgression. and most of all THANKS FOR FUCKING BREAKING MY NOT ONLY MY HEART BUT MY SOUL.
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    Friday, April 25, 2008
    what love is...
    Current mood:not good enough for the truth
    After all that you have done, after all that you have said, i still forgive you. You say i dont know what love is, when really you are the one who does not. Love is when even though your pissed you cant do anything to them in fear of them hating you for it, when you care so much about them that you cannot stop thinking about them and you want to be with them every second of the day. Love is when you would die just to touch them one last time, love is when you are happy for no reason just from being with them... therefore i know what love feels like. Everyone knows i still love you. they know i would die for you even though you would not do the same for me. every night i used to cry my eyes out untill i was so tired of crying and i couldnt breathe that i fell uncontious...but after hanging out with you it stopped... but now it is coming back worse and worse than before. i hope you know i love you and i alwase will even if you do the meanest things i still care about you... i guess thats exactly what you want to hear. so you can just use me over and over and over again... im sorry...





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