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    dots Submission Name: Lovedots
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    Author: HaldirLives
    Elite Ratio:    5.12 - 234/149/60
    Words: 47
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
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    Description:
       Haven't written anything in a long time. A guy I'm talking to got me to thinkinh why I haven't written anything, so I'm trying to get back into this poetry thing.


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    dotsLovedots
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    There is no word like Love.
    No word that
    Catches on the tongue,
    And robs you of
    Sustaining breath,
    Yet sustains the soul.
    No word that
    Numbs hungers and thirst,
    Yet hungers company
    And thirsts for forgiveness.
    No word can replace
    That which is
    Love.




    Submitted on 2009-08-12 08:35:36     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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