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    dots Submission Name: Blissdots
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    Author: HaldirLives
    Elite Ratio:    5.12 - 234/149/60
    Words: 44
    Class/Type: Poetry/Longing
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    Description:
       I've been "talking" to a friend. We agreed to date just before he went overseas for his job, and he is about a week overdue coming home. I don't like touching people, and I realized how much I like him when I realized that I'm dying for him to come back so that I can touch him. That's what this is about.


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    dotsBlissdots
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    Caring, longing, wishing, waiting,
    Awaiting your smile, your laugh,
    Your touch.
    To sit at your side
    With my arm against yours.
    The hand never held,
    To nest in the warmth of yours.
    The unpracticed lips. . . .
    This, I think, would be bliss.




    Submitted on 2009-08-12 08:41:36     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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