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    Author: HaldirLives
    Elite Ratio:    5.12 - 234/149/60
    Words: 78
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
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       I've never had a boyfriend before, and I have a relationship thatis heading that way fast. It scares the crap out of me.


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    dotsJump!dots
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    Why am I doing this?
    This ledge, you have leapt from before.
    Shall I take your hand,
    And jump with you?
    I feel as though
    I am leaping from this precipice alone.

    Don't forget
    This is new for me.
    The words, the actions, the feelings,
    I have no place for them.
    So I hesitate.

    Hold me, take me,
    Pull me down.
    Shield my eyes.
    I see the rocks below,
    And need to ignore them.




    Submitted on 2009-08-12 09:03:01     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      It sounds as if you expect to dive heart first into the rocks and fail miserably at this relationship (which has the ebb and flow of a suicide watch). Quite the twisted 'happily never after' scenario. i wish you you sweat free palms and calm nerves. :)
    | Posted on 2009-08-14 00:00:00 | by rws | [ Reply to This ]


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