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    dots Submission Name: Someday Baby Doll, Somedaydots
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    Author: Kaygrl
    ASL Info:    19/female/Washington
    Elite Ratio:    2.31 - 153/196/213
    Words: 240
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
    Total Views: 38
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    dotsSomeday Baby Doll, Somedaydots
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    With every boy that looks her way she tries.
    She holds her hopes too high to fly.
    Every one that says those words to make her melt,
    She falls for their games and falls hard.
    She gives the benefit of the doubt and gives second chances too many times.
    With every boy that says a sweet word,
    That tells her she’s pretty,
    With every boy that sweeps her off her feet
    Comes every tear when she discovers that they don’t really want her.
    When she believes them when they say they’re different,
    She is crushed again when she finds they’re not.

    Well honey- learn to guard your heart.
    Good guys are hard to find.
    Guys are dogs but there are some good ones out there,
    You just have to weed through the scum to find them.
    Well sweetie- listen to your friends,
    They grow tired of you giving away your heart to just anyone,
    Then holding you and whispering words of comfort as you cry.
    You don’t have to be in the arms of a boy to be happy.
    And I know you think you’ll never find that special man who respects you,
    Who loves you for who you are and will do anything just to make you happy,
    But someday baby doll, someday you will.




    Submitted on 2009-08-12 15:49:28     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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