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    dots Submission Name: curtains, infant, joydots
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    Author: meoww
    Elite Ratio:    6.75 - 262/258/143
    Words: 69
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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    dotscurtains, infant, joydots
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    pale
    desiderata
    war
    and the angle
    of cheekbones
    caught

    between infinite
    and the taste
    of sorrow

    walking
    alone

                        what it means
    to believe           and search
    ash                          still air
    fetid                disappointed
    disillusioned      transparent

    in the way                      all
    and everything

    merge.




    Submitted on 2009-08-13 07:23:47     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      I'll drink to that. To the way all and everything merge!
    | Posted on 2009-08-27 00:00:00 | by CrypticBard | [ Reply to This ]


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