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Hidden in Plain sight

Author: dismentled
ASL Info:    26/M/"South of Heaven"
Elite Ratio:    4.06 - 625 /583 /217
Words: 167
Class/Type: Lyrics /Love
Total Views: 1419
Average Vote:    5.0000
Bytes: 1144


Hidden in Plain sight

shes an angel
in sheeps clothing
wheres no mask
but the pains not showing
strickens herself
but no sins eroding
raises herself up
beyond comprehending

she is better
she is stronger
she is wiser
she's in me!
she is lovely
vain as a dove
and in spite of myself
its me she loves!

I give her a kiss
and fall from exhistance
I give her all of me
without any hesitance
I give her all I have
though deserving more
I give her all of me
forever and once more!

she is better
she is wiser
she is strong
she's in me!
she is so lovely
vain as a dove
and in spite of myself
its me she loves!

Another cry
sounding like a whelp
inside of her
I burn and help

She is mine
she is me
only better, wiser
and lovelier to the touch
I am her
and hers forever
only she's better
and mine to touch!

Submitted on 2009-08-14 14:28:46     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  I love this one too :)
maybe I'm a little biased
but this is too fucking beautiful<3
you make me believe I am this amazing ^-^
our love definitely is <3
and this write is pretty kickass too!

Love how it was unique for a love write but still got your point across crystal clearly.
I loved all of it and the whole impact really was an altogether thing, hard to pick favorite spots but the last verse made me smile a little extra ;)

faving this one too <3
you're amazing angel,
I'm so lucky to have you;
always, forever and in whatever follows,
no matter what!

| Posted on 2009-09-12 00:00:00 | by silent_death12 | [ Reply to This ]

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