I wanna scream
I wanna break
I sit here calm
trying to fake
That I'm fine
perhaps ok
that my minds not
plauged by moral decay
i feel all hope disinigrate
a tempting display
of a more bitter fate
in a time not wence knew
I will never promise
I don't love you!
I feel it all penetrate
whatever the fuck is "it"
so sick and tired
of all the same shit
bite my tounge
to prevent from screaming
choke on the blood
i think i pierced it
so i sit and fake
preteninding more
like some fucking
pimpless whore
broke and broken
from my undoing
the sky is falling
u chicken dumpling
but hey
it'll all b ok
no one will know anyways
that inside you
screamed and breaked
because you're not ok anyways!
I forgot how depressing this was :(
sorry but I really don't care for this one.
I can still rock the beautiful misery style,
just....not liking this one.
Lots of emotion,
no holding back,
nice wording,
poetic enough...
just not at all my favorite of yours.
mm I do like this, very different your style but its a nice different! i love how each line is eating off one another and as the reader reads on you make this post grow and grow kudos to you my friend this is a great post straight from the heart.
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