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    dots Submission Name: Nothing Moredots
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    Author: jackz
    ASL Info:    24/F/OH
    Elite Ratio:    3.76 - 591/622/378
    Words: 134
    Class/Type: Fanfic/What you did
    Total Views: 485
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       Decided To My Mother


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    dotsNothing Moredots
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    Take this pain you have brought upon me,
    take these restless... endless nights you have cursed me with.

    Knowing me due to the simple fact that you conceived me,
    knowing what I longed for you took this... and used me.

    A doll with strings I am to you,
    and a few fixes a night I am to him.

    Nothing more than a freak controlled by those I trusted.
    Nothing more than an unwanted, discarded, and used child.

    Do you hear my cries?
    Do you see my tears?
    Do you feel my pain?

    No!
    You never will...

    For you are not an unwanted,discarded, and used child.
    Yet I am.

    No more than a freak controlled by those I trusted.
    No more than an unwanted, discarded, and used child.




    Submitted on 2009-08-15 01:08:55     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Intense. I saw the fanfic listing..but these words feel genuine..or at least the feeling invoked. The repetition I think played a big part in that. I like the general anatomy of this piece as well.
    | Posted on 2009-08-15 00:00:00 | by harrieart | [ Reply to This ]


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