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My Keeper

Author: MysterydarkPoet
ASL Info:    20/f/Aust
Elite Ratio:    3.13 - 157 /295 /173
Words: 135
Class/Type: Poetry /Serious
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My Keeper

Golden skies shine
from beyond this stretching horizon,
making winter grass glow
and give warmth to brushing fingertips

Deep blue sea sparkles
through sad, salty tears
making it glisten like precious stones
and present little hope to watching eyes

A hand should reasure,
A hug should comfort,
A promise should give faith,
A life-

dusty pink clouds,
drift and collide.
Toss thoughts from side to side,
then drift again, and hide.

i can reach,
but i can't grasp.
I will feel,
but i won't imagine.

it's something deeper than thought,
something deeper than soul-

A heartbeat-
a breath-

hold my woeful sorrows.

But please, don't let them go.

are my keeper of life,

so i beg,
don't ever go.

Submitted on 2009-08-15 10:09:15     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  Beuatiful... reminds me of me and my husband how deeply in love we are ,
and how beautifull love really is..

very inspiring!
| Posted on 2009-08-21 00:00:00 | by totojane03 | [ Reply to This ]

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