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    dots Submission Name: Saturday Nightdots
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    Author: dx10687
    ASL Info:    22 / M / IA
    Elite Ratio:    2.62 - 13/19/18
    Words: 165
    Class/Type: Lyrics/Romance
    Total Views: 445
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 1160



    Description:
       Went out with my brother this weekend and then came up with this when driving back to college the next day.


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    dotsSaturday Nightdots
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    Its you
    Its me
    Its now
    Its downtown

    You are looking fine tonight
    We should paint the town red
    Lets going downtown
    Cause that is where the party is at

    Its you
    Its me
    Its now
    Its downtown

    Lets go to The Vine
    Where everything is going alright
    Lets hit the Piano Lounge
    Where the music is flowing all night

    Its you
    Its me
    Its now
    Its downtown

    Lets hit up Brothers
    Where everyone knows you
    Then wander to the Fieldhouse
    Where something is always happening

    Its you
    Its me
    Its now
    Its downtown

    There's that bell
    Its last call
    This night shouldn’t end yet
    Lets find an after party

    Its you
    Its me
    Its now
    Its downtown

    The night is coming to end
    But I really want it to keep going
    There has to be something we can do
    Lets take this back to my place

    Its you
    Its me
    Its now
    Its downtown




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