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    dots Submission Name: The Life of A Nice Guy (new)dots
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    Author: dx10687
    ASL Info:    22 / M / IA
    Elite Ratio:    2.62 - 13/19/18
    Words: 293
    Class/Type: Lyrics/Serious
    Total Views: 472
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 1803



    Description:
       Complete re edit of "The Life of A Nice Guy"


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    dotsThe Life of A Nice Guy (new)dots
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    Trying to live the life of a nice guy Is so hard
    Because you want everything to be perfect for everyone
    However in the long run you will learn that
    Sometimes it will be next to impossible

    Most of the time situations
    Where not everyone will be happy
    Are situations that arise from
    Friendships and relationships

    Trying to live the life of a nice guy Is so hard
    Because you want everything to be perfect for everyone
    However in the long run you will learn that
    Sometimes it will be next to impossible

    Nice guys have to be careful
    Cause they are always on a thin line
    When something goes array
    Their next move is crucial

    Trying to live the life of a nice guy Is so hard
    Because you want everything to be perfect for everyone
    However in the long run you will learn that
    Sometimes it will be next to impossible

    Feelings of not wanting to hurt anyone
    Are the hardest in relationships
    Cause you want your other to be happy
    No matter what pain it will cause you

    Trying to live the life of a nice guy Is so hard
    Because you want everything to be perfect for everyone
    However in the long run you will learn that
    Sometimes it will be next to impossible

    Sticky situations arise when friends fight
    Because you may end up having to pick a side
    But with wanting to appease everyone
    All you will do is hurt yourself

    Trying to live the life of a nice guy Is so hard
    Because you want everything to be perfect for everyone
    However in the long run you will learn that
    Sometimes it will be next to impossible




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