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    dots Submission Name: Those Things We Name Friends.dots
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    Author: WolvenGlade
    Elite Ratio:    8 - //
    Words: 137
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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    Average Vote:    4.7500
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       My thoughts, don't like the way I think? Then go **** yourself real hard...


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    dotsThose Things We Name Friends.dots
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    These things we name friends

    What are they for? To help us? To guide us?

    Both, friends can be anything you desire, but one main flaw in having friends

    They turn in the blink of an eye, they strike like venomous snakes when you are most open

    The people you trust turn around and bite you

    Causing everything you have to fade, some people build structures atop friends

    Then their structures collapse when their foundation moves or shakes

    I build my structures atop myself, all the weight of my world upon my shoulders

    Because friends are not to be trusted, they are merely tools to be used

    I choose to be and think like I do, I do not have these things names 'Friends'

    I have allies...




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      Hmm, I have to say this one is my favorite.
    I won’t lie to you and say “Oh this is so true and deep, and I don’t make friends either” But what I will say is this…

    Everyone has their own views about life and no matter how hard you may try you cannot change those views. I will not attempt to change your opinions on friendship and I have had friends turn their backs on me in the past.

    Most individuals are easily replaceable. People come, People go, that’s just how life works, but every now and then as you clear through the herds of people you’ll meet in life a few decide to stick around.

    Those few will stay with you through thick and thin through pain and happiness, you can have them forever, until they day that death embraces them if you open your eyes, I’m sure you will realize that you have them to…

    I still Respect your veiws,

    - DragonQueen
    | Posted on 2009-10-21 00:00:00 | by DragonQueen | [ Reply to This ]
      I have yet to find a "friend" who will go to the lengths for me, that I will for them. Therefore, I had to re-evaluate my list of "friends" and cut off the Allies (nicely, in case I need them), the Moochers (bluntly, cuz they cost me money), and the Users... well, those owe me, so I'm keeping around until I can steal back everything I think they owe me, then they get cut loose too.

    Never confuse Friends with Acquaintances. Acquaintances will always think before doing and then put their own best interests first, and true friends will be the ones YOU have to hold back from acting for you while convincing them to think FIRST before reacting.

    If you ever find a true friend, keep them close to your heart... they are as rare as unicorns.
    | Posted on 2009-08-20 00:00:00 | by Runes | [ Reply to This ]
      My Love,
    I have one true friend, and she has helped me stay alive.
    I know you have been hurt many times, so have I.
    You and I will rule the world together, I to hold your world on my shoulders.
    Wolven+Kiahtah=Forever!
    | Posted on 2009-08-19 00:00:00 | by Kiahtah | [ Reply to This ]
      I found this writing very great! Why?. Because there were words what stunned me and made speechless. And the thought behind it what made me to think deeply..
    | Posted on 2009-08-18 00:00:00 | by Lilyan | [ Reply to This ]
      Very well written. I agree with every word. I don't have friends, they hurt too much.
    | Posted on 2009-08-16 00:00:00 | by ModestyB | [ Reply to This ]
      very strongs words , someone must have hurt you, i feel a rage flowing your poem, very excellent detail of explaination of friends. I enjoy every word, great writing

    Chris
    | Posted on 2009-08-16 00:00:00 | by JoJoCrab | [ Reply to This ]
      haha friends are for the weak minded.


    wait...sometimes im weak minded????

    lol. good write, full of anger, but its good to let it out.
    | Posted on 2009-08-16 00:00:00 | by itsjustme22 | [ Reply to This ]


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