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    dots Submission Name: Lady in Reddots
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    Author: dx10687
    ASL Info:    22 / M / IA
    Elite Ratio:    2.62 - 13/19/18
    Words: 276
    Class/Type: Lyrics/Passion
    Total Views: 685
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 1763



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    dotsLady in Reddots
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    Are you seeing what I'm seeing
    Are you feeling what I'm feeling
    You are the most attractive girl
    I've ever seen and have had as a friend

    I know you are just looking to have fun
    And aren't looking for anything too serious
    But I wish you would make an exception for me
    Because I would make it worth your while

    Are you seeing what I'm seeing
    Are you feeling what I'm feeling
    You are the most attractive girl
    I've ever seen and have had as a friend

    I know we don't have the most in common
    But as people say opposites attract
    And I am for sure attracted to you
    It's probably not what you think though

    Are you seeing what I'm seeing
    Are you feeling what I'm feeling
    You are the most attractive girl
    I've ever seen and have had as a friend

    I'm attracted to you for several reasons
    One you have an amazing personality
    Two you are a smart person
    Third you know what you want in life

    Are you seeing what I'm seeing
    Are you feeling what I'm feeling
    You are the most attractive girl
    I've ever seen and have had as a friend

    There are countless more similar reasons
    For why I am attracted to you
    But those are the top three by far
    And on top of it all you have looks that kill

    Are you seeing what I'm seeing
    Are you feeling what I'm feeling
    You are the most attractive girl
    I've ever seen and have had as a friend
    I've ever seen and have had as a friend




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