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Submission Name:
Flow
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Author:
col13x
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194
Class/Type:
Poetry/Serious
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Flow
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Flow
In those flowing drops of water
Which carry the salt inside your soul
Send their ripples to the alter
Of the eternal human heart
All the sorrow and pain you gather
Is blessed inside your tears
The sadness in your eyes
Tells you there can be no
Compromise
To the flow of another torture
In the damage of their lives
Do you wake up in the destruction
Of everything you believe
This unity of love
Was it just something we all dreamed
Are we lost inside a nightmare
Of the money print machine
And only if we dare
To show one another that we
Care
In the flowing veins of blood
Which carry the history of our race
Send their sacrifice ever timeless
Never having known their place
And hope is the drug
We can never get enough of
All the sorrow and pain your gather
Is blessed inside your tears
The sadness in your eyes
Tells you there can be no
Compromise
And only if we dare
To show one another that we
Care
Submitted on 2009-08-16 19:31:05
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wow kinda sad but writen with a strong emotion and had me glued to the page.
I loved it.
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