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    Author: silverdrika
    ASL Info:    22/F/Brasil
    Elite Ratio:    5.94 - 127/123/43
    Words: 60
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
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    dotswho you aredots
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    There are only two kinds of people in the world
    Those who do and those who donít
    Two kinds of people who donít
    Those who canít and those who wonít
    Two kinds of people who wonít
    Those who know why and those who donít

    And those who do, either love or fear
    And those who love are never near




    Submitted on 2009-08-16 21:39:23     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      i liked this, it was simple yet true and didn't have to be contrived. i like the directness of the piece. i agree with chris and i think that poems dont need to always have metaphors to be good. this is an example of that :)

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    Kat
    | Posted on 2011-09-05 00:00:00 | by moonlitsky | [ Reply to This ]
      straight to the point , letting the truth about people who they are, even though, a lot of people come in our lives fake and full of bull, I'm glad you wrote a passage that has some true meanings, great poem, keep writing

    Chris
    | Posted on 2009-08-19 00:00:00 | by JoJoCrab | [ Reply to This ]


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