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My darling honest shadow

Author: Rhythmal
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Words: 36
Class/Type: Poetry /Love
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This, I will Definateley expand.

My darling honest shadow

My lady my love,
My sweet darling dove

My shadow dancer,
My honest answer

Night hunter, darkness walking,
Night hunter, shadow stalking.

Submitted on 2009-08-16 23:12:02     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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