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    dots Submission Name: Night Whispersdots

    Author: col13x
    Elite Ratio:    2.26 - 119/300/559
    Words: 232
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
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    dotsNight Whispersdots

    Night Whispers

    The quiet witch’s purple of night
    Hit by the artists of stars
    The mysterious bridge which hangs between
    The splash of light
    Where you have been
    And where you are

    Velvet print of the moon
    Blue to clouds it hangs full
    Silver platter hammered out by dreams
    Reflects its spray upon the sea
    As Cytherea welded love to the skies

    And fairy light the distant winking of wings
    Nudges on to its distance
    Calling with that soft jet engine roar
    To places so far it has seen before
    And carry me there
    Not leave me sitting here
    Star struck by the shore
    With a wing and a prayer

    The plush heat of summer breezes blow
    Gentle fingers of the dark
    And they finally leave their finger marks
    On timeless whispers caught by waves
    And from themselves
    And from my lips
    Reverberates every syllable
    Of your name

    Alone in the dunes
    And comforted by cliffs
    The eternal and I breathe one so slowly
    We hang together on this mysterious bridge
    And look up at the splash of light
    Where you have been
    And where you are

    Soft foot print the moon
    True to the clouds I hang full
    The silver platter hammered out by my dreams
    Reflects my love upon the sea
    When Cytherea welded love to the stars

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      Beautiful piece of work. And the imagery that you give your readers with this is simply phenominal. I loved it and I want to continually read.
    | Posted on 2009-08-27 00:00:00 | by poet09 | [ Reply to This ]
      I really enjoyed this poem and in the beging of the poem it kind seemed like I was in a fairy tale under the stars and moon, and some how in a summer day next...


    | Posted on 2009-08-21 00:00:00 | by totojane03 | [ Reply to This ]
      Wow.. this poem was so descriptive and very well written, I loved it. Thanks for writing this wonderful peice.
    | Posted on 2009-08-17 00:00:00 | by captureyourself | [ Reply to This ]

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