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Its just me

Author: extrEMO
ASL Info:    18. Ima guy. NC
Elite Ratio:    2.22 - 77 /57 /29
Words: 47
Class/Type: Poetry /Angry
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Its just me

So much fuckin hatred and anger inside one person
How can it be?
Ill tell you, ITS JUST ME
Listen to me damn it, if your reading this
I dont care what you think about me
Im ugly, stupid, retarted
I dont care
Its just me

Submitted on 2009-08-18 20:13:23     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  Holy (censored), I just found someone with lower self esteem than mine.
| Posted on 2011-02-12 00:00:00 | by Undead37 | [ Reply to This ]
  wow... Every person has something negative within.. but u portrayed the ugly truth so boldly
| Posted on 2009-09-13 00:00:00 | by kavya | [ Reply to This ]
  I don't know what you look like but you're not stupid or retarted. Anger lessens as you age, hopefully, but self hatred goes on. They say 'learn to love yourself'. How can you? I still don't and I'm a lot older than you. Hope all goes well for you.
| Posted on 2009-08-26 00:00:00 | by ModestyB | [ Reply to This ]
  Rephase that to something along these lines :

So much anger, pain welling inside.
No more reasons to hide.
This is me,
are you going to hide?

I'm no god,
I'm far from that fact.
I see pain,
and can't pull back.

This is me,
are you running to hide.
It's just me,
and my pain that's inside.
| Posted on 2009-08-20 00:00:00 | by Scaredheart | [ Reply to This ]

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