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A fair request

Author: Ontlogicalamity
ASL Info:    33/M/NY
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Words: 29
Class/Type: Cheesy Joke /Comedy
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Just a fun little blurb.

A fair request

She asked me to leave her something for the morning:

Something for the morning,
Would have to be facile.
You can't read something complicated
While eating breakfast cereal.

Submitted on 2004-07-19 13:12:07     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  yeah i didn't really get it. i keep reading it over and over hoping it'll come to me...but it hasn't. oh well, im sure someones laughing somwhere/
| Posted on 2004-07-31 00:00:00 | by L.A Sierra | [ Reply to This ]
  I like this it is simple and true. I can completely understand these few lines, this is unique and cute for lack of a better word. Nice write. :)
| Posted on 2004-07-20 00:00:00 | by Belle De Jour | [ Reply to This ]
  This one must be over my head, because I'm not getting it. Maybe it is more of a riddle than a joke.
Please enlighten me and welcome to the site
| Posted on 2004-07-19 00:00:00 | by nicelyJ | [ Reply to This ]

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