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Too Happy Hour

Author: Lynda
ASL Info:    26/F
Elite Ratio:    2.89 - 40 /45 /29
Words: 112
Class/Type: Misc /Misc
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Too Happy Hour

Damn your big vulnerable smile
Because it's me who's rendered defenseless
You seem so harmless and exposed
And it makes me feel like I've known you forever
I feel too safe, too comfortable
Not prepared for what comes next
Suddenly we've gone from laughing
to a close hold and a long gaze
Oblivious to those around us
You drew me in so easily
I'm in awe of what you can make me do
My usually composed behavior is compromised
In front of employees and managers
I know it's not proper as 9-5 associates
To give in this easily at happy hour
If you only hadn't smiled...

Submitted on 2009-08-19 19:05:08     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  I like how the beginning and end has to do with the smile, and I like how it tells a story. I also like the first line because its very differently describing. You could feel the chemestry betwwen you two just through your words. I don't know if this guy is real or not but I say go for him :] haha.

| Posted on 2009-08-20 00:00:00 | by Suicidalchild51 | [ Reply to This ]

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