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    Author: ShadowGaze
    Elite Ratio:    0.87 - 27/15/27
    Words: 36
    Class/Type: Story/Serious
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    the omen,
    he steals from you,
    your soul,
    your mind,
    your control,
    everything.
    the dark angel,
    he will save you,
    catch you if you fall,
    kiss you when you cry.
    they work together and against eachother.




    Submitted on 2009-08-20 18:42:37     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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