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    dots Submission Name: Loved?dots

    Author: jackz
    ASL Info:    24/F/OH
    Elite Ratio:    3.76 - 591/622/380
    Words: 153
    Class/Type: Deep Thought/Passion
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       I just want to know is it possible... Can I still be loved by God even though I have my flaws... even though I am a sinner

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    I sit here dumbfounded by my ignorance,
    I question your love,
    I cannot see how it is possible.

    Can you love me even with all my flaws?
    Is there a way to look past all my wrong doings?
    Or all the sins I have done in this life?

    Can I truly accept you into this life & you love me wholeheartedly?
    Is it possible to be forgiven, to be "Saved"?

    I long to feel your warmth when I do not have any,
    I look for your comfort but am lost!

    Alone I am,
    Hurting I have been,
    Lost for so long I have forgotten what it feels to be found!

    Where do I begin?
    Where do I go?

    I need you Lord,
    I am lost...
    Please Lord
    Take pity on me,

    Wrap up within your embrace,
    hold me close for its been so long!

    Submitted on 2009-08-20 20:51:26     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Very Great Write So enjoyable! I too am a christian and often find myself praying for his presence to surround my heart an soul and keep me safe...

    I love this poem... keep up the great writing!

    | Posted on 2009-08-21 00:00:00 | by totojane03 | [ Reply to This ]
      Powerful thought evoking and really intense from an internal perspective. Emotions laid bare.
    | Posted on 2009-08-21 00:00:00 | by Clayman | [ Reply to This ]

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