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    dots Submission Name: Mr. King: Raise the Chalice in Death.dots
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    Author: Lincesa
    ASL Info:    15/f/The kitchen
    Elite Ratio:    5.78 - 11/9/9
    Words: 141
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
    Total Views: 53
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
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       i'm not sure.
    it was simply a spur of the moment kind of deal.


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    dotsMr. King: Raise the Chalice in Death.dots
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    Stricken with grief, inhaling the sour of the tears. He raises his chalice to death.

    "Oh Mr. King, what shall we do?"

    Their cries echo, echo, echo, in that rapid mind of his. Those blurry faces, mourning and screeching.

    "Oh Mr. King, what will you do?"

    The jewlery, glimmering red blood, and ocean deep waters, he raises his chalice to death.

    "Oh Mr. King, are you dead?"

    That chalice of gold and white, clatters, clanking, shattering on the stone-molded ground. That malevolent grasp of reality, closing in.

    "Oh Mr. King, we raise your chalice in death."

    Slowly, slowly, slowly, those creeping of voices, left him. Allowing the claws of the shadowed wolverines to snatch him with their snarling grins, shredding him from tissue, to muscle, to his organs.

    Dead.




    Submitted on 2009-08-20 22:31:50     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      The picture the poem creates is terribly clear; it makes you think of one inside your head. Although, I found it hard to make much sense out of it...but perhaps that was the way it was supposed to be.
    -dancer
    | Posted on 2009-08-21 00:00:00 | by dancer-of-words | [ Reply to This ]
      Intense and very enticing indeed, great imagery and good choice of words here. I liked it.
    | Posted on 2009-08-21 00:00:00 | by Clayman | [ Reply to This ]



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