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    dots Submission Name: Oxford Blue With Some Misodots

    Author: Phagocyte
    Elite Ratio:    3.44 - 2/5/5
    Words: 206
    Class/Type: Poetry/Depressed
    Total Views: 780
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       Rather random poem, and I just wanted to write a poem or something, so I wrote this.

    I don't know if people can relate...But I hope you can enjoy it is you can't, and if you can relate to it, then I am happy to have written this poem.

    Thank you for reading, and thank you if you leave a review. Thank you.

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    dotsOxford Blue With Some Misodots

    This soul is not too broken,

    Just lying in the mud,

    This soul is not too broken,

    Just falling from the clouds,

    Not knowing where nothing is,

    Not knowing where the

    broken bottle is.

    The broken bottle, covered

    in black dusty dirt.

    Is full of spiders, who weave

    a blanket, just for two.

    This soul is not too broken,

    Just dying in the mud,

    This soul is not too broken,

    Just killing the merchants of time,

    Not knowing if it was right,

    Not knowing where the

    broken preacher is.

    The broken preacher, dead

    from the loss of blood.

    Yet coyotes take their fill

    of the crimson liquid and flesh.

    This soul is not too broken,

    Just crying in the mud,

    This soul is not too broken,

    Just accusing the murderers of murder,

    Not knowing whether it was the truth,

    Not knowing where the

    broken heart is.

    The broken heart, lay in

    the broken ice of Winter.

    The crow watches with wonder

    of this life which is empty filled.

    Submitted on 2009-08-21 03:51:16     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      I think this is great, had me captivated and feeling a deeper sense of purpose, short yet powerful in relaying its message. Good work.
    | Posted on 2009-08-21 00:00:00 | by Clayman | [ Reply to This ]

    Be kind, take a few minutes to review the hard work of others <3
    It means a lot to them, as it does to you.

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