Mindful... this is a haunted piece, oddly imaged but quietly beautiful, and transit... fragile passing things, be they abstract or living within defined outlines. I wish I had golden arms. I've never found starfish all that spectacular (I prefer sand dollars or sea horses), but you took some very dressed-down words and made it seem beautiful.... nova. I really like that line, including "tendrils"... it breathes life into an otherwise dead-and-stiff skull-stone with 5 points.
Submission Name: lux
