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    dots Submission Name: The Chorus Of Chorusdots
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    Author: Clayman
    ASL Info:    28 - getting late
    Elite Ratio:    6.34 - 609/327/167
    Words: 390
    Class/Type: Poetry/Serious
    Total Views: 619
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    Description:
       The feelings expressed when someone really needs someone else and the views of the person that helps them.


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    dotsThe Chorus Of Chorusdots
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    To him

    Sad little heap waste of time i am.
    Alone in this world pretending im fine.
    I need his comforting reason - his words.
    He helps me to sew up the stitches-mend the hurts.
    I need him so badly, my sullen refrain rings sadly.
    He's not like them-the same... Life seems different to him-a game.
    All the players he's known a long time, this time just meeting them in a different line.
    Who is this man really? I yearn his knoweledgeable glean.
    I want his riches-his wisdom, so many things to learn from him.
    Happy i should be-he is sharing freely again.

    To them


    I only live when i help them, understand them.
    Happiness eludes me lest i help someone who isn't me.
    Incomplete i am when not completing them, i just want to be there for someone to fill in the times i was alone.
    Happiness i find in helping them-forever bound to them as one.
    Filling in their puzzles reveals mine.
    The only way to satisfy my hunger is to quench their thirst.
    Tears i weep for those that don't allow me.
    In the end you cannot set everyone free, sometimes they wilt - let them be.
    I pray for resolution, the way it must be.

    -Svw




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    ||| Comments |||
      You have me wondering who Him and Them are but I like certain parts of this and the whole "we need each other" feeling it has.

    Him- is it God? it reads a bit pious / holy.

    Them- is it people in general? those close to you perhaps. Being able to help others makes you feel whole. I like that.

    And the end where you simply put it all to prayer.

    A bit of an enigma.. but that's how poetry is isn't it.
    | Posted on 2010-01-07 00:00:00 | by kre8ive1 | [ Reply to This ]


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