Tears of Rain by Alilia

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Submission Name: Tears of Rain dots

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Author:	Alilia
Elite Ratio:	1.37 - 18/30/39
Words:	27

Class/Type:	Poetry/Longing
Total Views:	54
Average Vote:	No vote yet.
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Tears of Rain dots

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The tears come easy now
Always when I think of nothing
I try to run away
But there is nowhere to go
I am lost without you

Submitted on 2009-08-21 15:09:12 Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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After reading a lot of your work I've realized that most of it deals with longing and saddness. Emotions directly experienced by a writer can bring out the best in them. Just look at your work, it's wonderful and there's something I like about the style itself. The feeling of emptiness in this one is portrayed in a way that makes your words so lively. Well done.
| Posted on 2009-08-24 00:00:00 | by PanKavani | [ Reply to This ]

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