Writingpoetry

[ Join Free! ]
(No Spam mail)

dotsdots
nav
  • RolePlay
  • Join Us
  • Writings
  • Shoutbox
  • Community
  • Digg Mashup
  • Mp3 Search
  • Online Education
  • My Youtube
  • Ear Training
  • Funny Pics
  • nav



    nav
  • Role Play
  • Piano Music
  • Free Videos
  • Web 2.0
  • nav



    << | >>
    poetry


    dots Submission Name: Twelve Point Ghostdots
    --------------------------------------------------------





    Author: col13x
    Elite Ratio:    2.26 - 119/300/559
    Words: 215
    Class/Type: Poetry/Longing
    Total Views: 441
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 1506



    Description:
       


    Make the font bigger!! Double Spacing Back to recent posts.

    dotsTwelve Point Ghostdots
    -------------------------------------------


    Twelve Point Ghost



    I am a man of passions glass
    A root of haunted pixels
    A nonentity of finger smooth silk
    Expression through times new roman point twelve
    Twelve-point gauge

    Where is the fire
    Knocked out by white digital pages
    Staccato print for all this want
    Flat on Seurat landscapes to divulge
    These transitory pleas

    Is this how ghosts feel
    Twelve-point ghost is me
    Living vicariously through other image worlds
    And the silence always to remind them
    With mere alphabet constructions
    To appease

    The solitude of eternal love
    My oh my, what a lifetimes worth of irony
    Heckles me on my stage
    To be brought to this
    This embrace of electrical wish
    Which has no place
    In the cellular symbiosis
    Of this
    My body animate

    The girders and foundations
    Of hard drive wires
    And operating systems
    These ghostly twelve point impressions
    Of a touch which scours the tarnish
    From the bleak and lost
    And saves them

    I am a man of velvet glass obsession
    A man of hard crystal to the touch
    In the feel of haunted pixels
    An anonymous of the finger ilk
    Taps twelve times new roman point twelve
    Twelve-point gauge
    Twelve point ghost










    Submitted on 2009-08-21 16:53:00     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
    Submissions: [ Previous ] [ Next ]

    Rate This Submission

    1: >_<
    2: I dunno...
    3: meh!
    4: Pretty cool
    5: Wow!




    ||| Comments |||
      Wow! This is such a great write and there is nothing wrong with it. Fits together and leaves me spechless!


    love it!

    totojane
    | Posted on 2009-08-21 00:00:00 | by totojane03 | [ Reply to This ]


    Think Feedback more than Compliments :: [ Guidelines ]

    1. Be honest.
    2. Try not to give only compliments.
    3. How did it make you feel?
    4. Why did it make you feel that way?
    5. Which parts?
    6. What distracted from the piece?
    7. What was unclear?
    8. What does it remind you of?
    9. How could it be improved?
    10. What would you have done differently?
    11. What was your interpretation of it?
    12. Does it feel original?



    177622

    Be kind, take a few minutes to review the hard work of others <3
    It means a lot to them, as it does to you.

    Once Again written by krs3332003
    I will call out your name written by RisingSon
    Dashboard Light written by layDsayD
    Trails written by Daniel Barlow
    Or are we written in the sand? written by Chelebel
    Waiting written by Daniel Barlow
    Primitive Lapse written by Crestfallenman
    Fasade written by jackz
    4th of July written by layDsayD
    Devils in the Details written by endlessgame23
    Treasure Chest written by PieceOfCake
    Bond written by saartha
    Brigit written by endlessgame23
    Summer written by layDsayD
    True Death written by layDsayD
    Alone in the Crowd written by SavedDragon
    It's Night Now written by RisingSon
    Sleep Talk written by Queen_of_spades
    Every..... written by jackz
    written by Daniel Barlow
    Supernatural Cowboy Sleuth (7) written by endlessgame23
    One Day written by WriteSomething
    Wavelength written by saartha
    Wish written by Daniel Barlow
    Bee Keeper written by endlessgame23
    What happens written by Wolfwatching
    Sunset written by rev.jpfadeproof
    Cosmic Dreams written by Chelebel
    Red Barn written by rev.jpfadeproof
    Push written by JanePlane

    Google
     


    poetry

    dotsLogindots

    User Name:

    Password:

    [ Quick Signup ]
    [ Lost Password ]


    January 10 07
    131,497 Poems
    Posted

    I have 14,000+ Subscribers on Youtube. See my Video Tutorials

    [ Angst Poetry ]
    [ Cutters ]
    [ Famous Poetry ]
    [ Poetry Scams ]



    FontSize:
    [ Smaller ] [ Bigger ]
     Poetry