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    dots Submission Name: Guiding The Lightdots
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    Author: Clayman
    ASL Info:    28 - getting late
    Elite Ratio:    6.34 - 609/327/167
    Words: 424
    Class/Type: Poetry/Happy
    Total Views: 552
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    Description:
       A piece about healing by laying on of hands or energy healing if u will.


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    dotsGuiding The Lightdots
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    When i focus carefully
    i can truly see what's in front of me.
    But more importantly
    i can percieve alot more intensely - intricately.
    He asked me to touch him,mend him..
    To lend my light into his skin..
    I close my eyes and feel the focus rise.
    Fully forming from inside and within.
    Lying before me - his body..His soul..
    I see it..So dark,so unwhole...
    I gather into me my energy as i start to see..
    Before me lies the plan to complete my goal.

    I feel the roots - so red - sending shoots
    through my feet going down.
    Sensing the glow i've come to know
    building,bubbling and brewing around me now.
    Slowly summoning up what belongs to me
    i feel my aura strongly steadily start to grow.
    It is my Prana,Chi,Ki or Qi - my energy
    freely flowing and forming me.
    As i become fully whole i gain control.
    I wince as i glimpse - i start to see:
    A heart so weak it's about to wither away..
    Black streaked seeping with sorrow.
    This man may not even see tomorrow.

    I reach into him feeling the life force
    emanating from his being..
    The cold creeps onto me
    clearly creating creases in my energy.
    But this doesn't scare me
    I have power of faith - my way of knowing.
    I begin by going down to his dark heart
    so slowly silently softly strobing...
    I start to focus on love
    asking powers from above to please be helping.
    The glow builds to the brightest white -
    the best & most potent light.
    Keeping thoughts clear i feel my mana
    flowing freely forth from my hands
    They create luminous wondrous light bands
    brilliantly entering the heart's rupture -
    healing the structure i only wish to nurture.

    I wish upon this man a great full future
    as his sorrows are that which i suture.
    I grab the darkness - holding his pain..
    I rip it all out so he can be whole again.
    And healed within - so perfect - free of sin.
    The darkness pulls free and exits his skin.

    This force not only comes from me or from within..
    It truly comes spiralling down through me from Him.
    True God from above filling my guided hands with love
    to fulfill my work for Him.
    By God's power of laying on of hands
    i can help to pull out the man's pains.
    And mend all his broken strands.

    -Svw




    Submitted on 2009-08-22 04:47:00     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      I sware you are a genious with words and this whole poem fits together nicely like a puzzle and i can feel the strong emotion in this poem and I can make good sense of it. Well written


    -Phoenixtale-
    | Posted on 2009-08-22 00:00:00 | by phoenixtale | [ Reply to This ]


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