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    dots Submission Name: The Ladderdots
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    Author: tea4two
    ASL Info:    47/M/TX.
    Elite Ratio:    1.7 - 8/3/3
    Words: 249
    Class/Type: Poetry/Society
    Total Views: 56
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    dotsThe Ladderdots
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    I climbed the highest ladder,
    To see what I could see;
    I saw my fellow countrymen,
    Living in poverty

    I climbed up even higher,
    As I grazed open skies;
    I saw murder, death and bloodshed,
    Before my very eyes

    I saw a ruling power,
    The middle-class shrank to poor;
    I saw wars and powerful conflicts,
    Standing at our doors

    I saw hungry children,
    Here, on our native soil;
    I saw the rich become richer,
    Thriving on the wealth of oil

    I saw separate entities,
    Like thieves in the night;
    They stole away our liberty,
    To strengthen their own might

    I saw those who fought in wars,
    Though victory spells defeat;
    Many were welcomed heroes,
    Now homeless on the streets

    I climbed above the highest clouds,
    Beyond where eagles soar;
    I saw social security fade away,
    No healthcare for the poor

    I saw drugs pollute our communities,
    While terrorists stalked their prey;
    Children had no love for their elders,
    Sunny skies turned a darkened gray

    I saw changes in power,
    Though no changes in government rule;
    Technology feasted on the obsolete,
    Our economy stolen by fools

    I saw fewer days of promise,
    Many days of pain;
    The poor are expendable fragments,
    Millions are dying in vain

    I climbed up, as far as I could go,
    My head pierced the deepest galaxy;
    I saw the oppressed in the arms of our Father,
    The Ruler of peace and prosperity






    Submitted on 2009-08-22 08:47:00     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      Wow... very interesting and heartfelt... i love how its your take on our world today but you still made it rhyme...LOL... its great, a brilliant work of honest art

    Sara :)
    | Posted on 2009-08-27 00:00:00 | by WhoKnows | [ Reply to This ]
      Wow very desciptive and beautiful poem, unfortunaitly I am afraid of hights so I wouldn't ever be able to climb that high....lol...
    Kept me glued to the page wanting to hear more though,.


    Totojane
    | Posted on 2009-08-27 00:00:00 | by totojane03 | [ Reply to This ]



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