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    Author: catfreak
    ASL Info:    15 / Female/ Indiana
    Elite Ratio:    0.6 - 0/2/5
    Words: 71
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
    Total Views: 50
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 501



    Description:
       I had to do a couplet poem of English and this is what I needed up with. A describation of my house.


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    Knickknacks on the shelves,
    And candles by themselves.

    Heavy curtains on the windows,
    Things the color indigo.

    Sorted CDs in small drawers,
    On the wide uncovered floor.

    Covered couch, long and wide,
    In which my mom has pride.

    Computers annd two TVs,
    Places where we all agree.

    What is this place,
    With so little space?

    It is my home,
    From where I would not roam.




    Submitted on 2009-08-22 08:51:09     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Hey i like it, paints a brilliant picture in my mind, makes me feel all warm and cozy inside. The short stanzas have impact and makes you take every word in and process it whilst your mind pieces them together and creates the picture. This is short and sweet yet powerful. I like. Good writing. Keep it up.
    | Posted on 2009-08-22 00:00:00 | by Clayman | [ Reply to This ]



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