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    dots Submission Name: Goodbye y'alldots
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    Author: Scaredheart
    ASL Info:    15/ Female/ NC
    Elite Ratio:    6.43 - 92/62/50
    Words: 107
    Class/Type: Poetry/Serious
    Total Views: 52
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 749



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       A goodbye so you wont forget. . .


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    dotsGoodbye y'alldots
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    Goodbye,
    please don't cry.
    It's been more fun,
    than I've ever had with anyone.

    A home and a haven,
    trust and love.
    It's hard to go,
    but I must.

    So see my path,
    still laid down.
    My foot steps,
    on this ground.

    Don't know how long they'll stay,
    but try and rememebr me for heavens sake.
    I can see it all,
    just from my start.

    I must say,
    y'all have big hearts.
    I wont forget,
    anyones name.

    And trust me,
    I'm not insane.
    So this is it,
    a real goodbye.

    See ya round,
    on the other side. . . .




    Submitted on 2009-08-22 10:16:47     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      NOO don't go!
    | Posted on 2009-08-25 00:00:00 | by extrEMO | [ Reply to This ]
      Goodbye.
    | Posted on 2009-08-22 00:00:00 | by Runes | [ Reply to This ]


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