its very descriptive its really hard to understand until you read it a few times. at least for me. its not clumsy i liked it because the way it was written you have to really think about what the meaning behind it was. i wasnt focused so much on what point you were trying to get across as much as i was focused on trying to figure out what was going on in your mind. i still dont know but i like that phrase people wear depression as their fashion. thats true. never thought of that but it is so true.