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    dots Submission Name: Grudge the servantdots
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    Author: MasterlessLight
    ASL Info:    28/M/MI
    Elite Ratio:    0.52 - 0/0/3
    Words: 58
    Class/Type: Random Thoughts/Serious
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    dotsGrudge the servantdots
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    Death the aspiration
    An unconscious eternity
    Dwell here in the deep black
    Shut out the noise and the ego
    Become nothing and live for nothing
    No yield in the silent mind
    Only a barren scar of a man
    Cursing and burning in his heart
    Promised to fail, Saved to condemn
    And with hatred spits his last words




    Submitted on 2009-08-22 20:53:55     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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