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    dots Submission Name: The New Womandots
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    Author: MasterlessLight
    ASL Info:    28/M/MI
    Elite Ratio:    0.52 - 0/0/3
    Words: 44
    Class/Type: Misc/Longing
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    dotsThe New Womandots
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    The Female ornate and instrumental
    The Female undermined and overburdened
    The Female mocked and silenced
    Is paving the way, Is living through me
    Her service enriches the spirit of the world
    Her strength eclipses the brutish man
    Her legacy is the masterless light




    Submitted on 2009-08-22 21:27:47     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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