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    dots Submission Name: The Cycles That Bind Usdots
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    Author: Clayman
    ASL Info:    28 - getting late
    Elite Ratio:    6.34 - 609/327/167
    Words: 241
    Class/Type: Poetry/Nature
    Total Views: 559
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    Description:
       The realities as we percieve it is all balanced by unknown forces and cycles that change to conform the world into a balace. This piece adresses those cycles.


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    dotsThe Cycles That Bind Usdots
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    Everything you know to be
    Is controlled by a force
    That we cannot see...

    It is the cycles that change...
    Causing our lives to rearrange.
    One day is bright and sunny..
    The next day could leave your eyes runny.
    Aint it funny?
    Maybe so..even strange...

    When happiness follows you around
    Beware a cycle change is to be found..
    Without a whisper..
    Without a sound..
    All your dreams can fall to the ground...
    This is the way that the cycle gets wound.

    It is the cycles that bind us.
    They know just how to find us.
    The cycle casts a shadow.. like a tree..
    Without them nothing can function
    Or even be..

    The cycles don't always cause danger.
    Even when it seems like happiness is a stranger..
    Bad things too must get to a halt
    Do not be hasty, do not fret
    If you are in torment..nothings at fault.
    The cycle will change that too..
    Remember what you give is what you get..
    Sometimes the cycles can work for you.

    Cycles are there to end..to begin..
    They create renewal..and destruction..
    Sometimes they can be benign..
    But the universe needs these laws
    To work smoothly..to make life function.

    Fear not cycles changing.
    Worry not about happiness coming to an end..
    It is the cycle WITHIN a cycle
    You should worry about my friend.
    We cannot predict what is coming..
    But we can see the end.

    -Svw




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