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lost.


Author: save me
ASL Info:    19/F
Elite Ratio:    1.78 - 26 /51 /53
Words: 137
Class/Type: Random Thoughts /Serious
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lost.



to feel relieved is only an imaginative state of mind.

there is a cloud of idiocracy that overwhelms my lungs, encompassing them with a faint tinge of a thousand young souls.

a foul smell of youth, wandering, lost.

why is it that so many questions are left unanswered?

why is it that i want answers to questions i don't hold?

these feelings change, they alter, they fluctuate from moment to moment.

to feel a sudden weight has been lifted off your chest in just a matter of minutes.

to feel those thousand waves crashing down on you suddenly subside and ease the feeling of regret.

all i can say is i'll never know, and neither will you.

i'm left here with only one thing:

confusion.




Submitted on 2009-08-23 16:50:25     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  Hmmm, it doesn't have a rythmn to me. The words dont flow but they are very powerful. It makes one think though.
| Posted on 2009-08-25 00:00:00 | by extrEMO | [ Reply to This ]


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