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    dots Submission Name: Musedots
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    Author: fictionalfiend
    ASL Info:    17/F/My mind
    Elite Ratio:    3.29 - 24/17/15
    Words: 174
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
    Total Views: 39
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 1094



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       A small thank you to my muse. I owe them a great deal.


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    dotsMusedots
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    Well, you never cease to amaze.
    You have been here from the very start.
    Probably even before that.
    You must tire of me some days.
    Your pathetic little vessel.
    Trying desperately to keep up with the gifts you bestow…

    Or maybe you enjoy watching me?
    Scribbling frantically away.
    Do I entertain you on some level?
    I suppose I would find all this amusing…
    A pathetic little figure below you
    Reliant entirely on your benevolence.

    Of course you have a hand in this.
    Even as I write this letter or poem or even a plea
    You are…around, pinching and prodding
    I see you as a sort of Hephaestus
    Tempering and honing until a shining idea appears
    Which you plunge, still hissing into my mind.

    I relish this surge of fire.
    This spasm, urging me to write, to pour
    To deliver to the world, your vision.
    I thank you, my saviour, my saint
    My Prince Charming and my Quasimodo
    Whoever you are. I am indebted.





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      **frantically

    Sorry, my main function on ES is SpellCheck.

    "I relish this surge of fire".... So beautiful, I'm serious. It's a little short and somewhat straightforward and bare, but God, the last stanza!
    | Posted on 2009-08-24 00:00:00 | by Shadowstar13 | [ Reply to This ]



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