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    dots Submission Name: lifedots
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    Author: joezwells
    Elite Ratio:    3.81 - 64/78/54
    Words: 73
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
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    risks taken
    are decisions made
    consequences vary
    its either love or pain

    visions shared
    are messages made clear
    thoughts unspoken
    is victory for your fear
    i
    mages embraced
    are moments not put to waste
    they are captured and remembered
    and help fill the empty space

    its the times when we forget
    dismissing all the love we have to collect
    dwelling in out past regrets
    suddenly our lives become neglect




    Submitted on 2009-08-23 22:49:29     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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