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Author: joezwells
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Words: 73
Class/Type: Poetry /Misc
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risks taken
are decisions made
consequences vary
its either love or pain

visions shared
are messages made clear
thoughts unspoken
is victory for your fear
mages embraced
are moments not put to waste
they are captured and remembered
and help fill the empty space

its the times when we forget
dismissing all the love we have to collect
dwelling in out past regrets
suddenly our lives become neglect

Submitted on 2009-08-23 22:49:29     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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