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My Way Home

Author: Raindrops
ASL Info:    25/f/Pennsylvania
Elite Ratio:    2.48 - 184 /213 /288
Words: 123
Class/Type: Poetry /Religious
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Written on August 18, 2009.

My Way Home

Lord, give me a willing heart
to serve you just to serve you
Break down the barriers
I put up to hide me from you.

All Powerful, All Mighty
I am under Your command
Please take me by the hand
and guide me in the right direction.

My heart longs to serve you
But I somehow keep getting in the way
Lord, please take my selfishness away

Use me to do Your will
So that all is not lost
for me and for everyone
because Your son paid the cost.

Help me to find my way
through each and every trying day
to reach out and love those who need you
and to find my way..


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