for the first while i thought, for some odd reason, you may have been talking about god. just the ever presentness of the being in this piece but i doubt god would have a choking suffocating effect though i guess anything is possible depending on your relationship/thought processes toward such things.
the first stand alone line should read "you're"
i dont think you make a very solid point with this piece.
its almost like the last line comes from no where and if you are looking for the reader to understand and make some kind of judgment call theyre unable to because there isnt much to base the question on...
the rest of the piece doesnt seem to lead to the question. maybe try to integrate the idea of 'how is this not murder' a little better and give the reader a better sense of what it is thats happening that causes you to ask such a question...
not a very coherent comment on my part
i hope it makes some kind of sense.