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    dots Submission Name: MeNUdots
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    Author: vanhokinshtyl
    ASL Info:    8/M/UK
    Elite Ratio:    3.09 - 119/200/71
    Words: 164
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
    Total Views: 534
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 1038



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    dotsMeNUdots
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    Well I'm lonely, but I'm happy,
    No longer scared to die, but I'd rather be
    Lonely with you somewhere else,
    I can't love one thing when I love everything,
    But you replace almost all those things,
    I'm in love with you and no one else

    And you talked so much that night I thought
    That you were shaking me to stop
    But once I start to think,
    I want you, and no one else...

    ...Could ever top your charts,
    Skip a song before it starts,
    And we'll save cash by just sitting in the car,
    In the dark
    In the parking lot
    Talking about what we haven't got,
    Well i think we just found it,
    Simply rectangular ain't no way around it
    Honestly my heart's so far away
    from land, it's funny

    Well we talked so much that night I thought
    That you were begging me to stop
    But once I start to think,
    I want you, and no one else...




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