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    dots Submission Name: Without the Cape, I'm Just a Mandots
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    Author: vanhokinshtyl
    ASL Info:    8/M/UK
    Elite Ratio:    3.09 - 119/200/71
    Words: 398
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
    Total Views: 558
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 2534



    Description:
       succumbing. relinquishing power(s).


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    dotsWithout the Cape, I'm Just a Mandots
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    This is the worst day of my life,
    I don't wanna save the world today,
    I say:
    "Give me what I need...
    In fact, just give me a little bit of everything you got."
    Cause without that cape, I'm just a man

    You cut me out a little room
    From a square within a square,
    You kept me a secret
    That remains no longer there,
    I'm nothing without that cape,
    Without that cape, I'm just a man,
    Without the man, it's just a cape,
    And then it's nothing super, man

    Tell me who you are?
    And what have you been planning to do to me?
    I'm a prisoner,
    Your Kryptonite weakens me,
    But I'm still standing...
    Until you ask me to sit down,
    Cause without that cape, I'm just a man

    You cut me out a little room
    From a square within a square,
    You kept me a secret
    That remains no longer there,
    I'm nothing without that cape,
    Without that cape, I'm just a man,
    Without the man, it's just a cape,
    And then it's nothing super, man

    I don't wanna be the superhero
    If I just appear to be the immortal guy,
    (Cause) I saw him in a wheelchair
    Just before I saw him die,
    (I mean..) How could you expect to save the world
    With the chance someone could end your life?
    You could miss your landing after your first attempt to fly..

    This is the worst day of my life,
    I don't wanna save the world today
    You say:
    "Give me what I need!"
    So I began to give you a little bit of everything I had,
    My power, my strength
    Cause without that cape, I'm just a man.

    You cut me out a little room
    From a square within a square,
    You kept me a secret
    That remains no longer there,
    I'm nothing without that cape,
    Without that cape, I'm just a man,
    Without the man, it's just a cape,
    And then it's nothing super, man

    I don't wanna be the superhero
    If I just appear to be the immortal guy,
    (Cause) I saw him in a wheelchair
    Just before I saw him die,
    (I mean..) How could you accept to save the world
    With the chance someone could end your life?
    You could miss your landing after your first attempt to fly.. (Smack!!!)




    Submitted on 2009-08-25 00:54:10     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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